First of please run this through some form of spell check. Next:
- Quote :
- the original first pool has a limited valve that only lets out a little bit of aura into the second pool(The maximum amount capable of being transfered per post is the users amount of usable aura)
Thats already covered by the rules...
- Quote :
- (the amount capable of being stored being 50% of the users base of aura)
This is a nightmare to understand, try something like: "The amount, that may be stored, is equal to 50% of the users maximum Aura." and make it a sentence instead of just a note in brackets.
- Quote :
- his/her
Since this is your Nen and only your's you do not need to do this.
Lastly please check again for some grammar and end your sentences with propper punctuation, instead of using commas.